20.8.13

The rss hub launch

W.A.L.T is to entertain people

In room14 we have been writing about the rss hub launch   





1 comment:

  1. Adam, you are starting to add extra detail to help make your message clear for your reader. You are starting to paragraph your ideas, just make sure that the sentences in the paragraphs say what you want to say (keep re-reading to check for sense and accuracy). Your goal is to continue to focus on structuring your sentences and beginning to organise your ideas into paragraphs.

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