Criteria:
Use vocabulary (words) that help to clearly describe
Verbs to give action - brings our character to life
Adverbs describe my verbs
I have used adjectives to help describe my character
My writing is organised into paragraphs (ideas in each paragraph is connected)
I have used the thesaurus to extend my own vocabulary
The reader can understand and FEEL how special this character is to us
I have SHOWN the reader what my character is like as a person
I have made sure my sentences make sense
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