Criteria using verbs&adding detail &capture the attention
In room 14 we have been writing about funny pet or bad pet.I Have a story for you. I hope like it
I think that I did the best that I could .buddy I think that you are experienced at shooting and good luck
Adam, you are trying really hard to add interest to your writing (to entertain your audience). We were focusing on verbs (action words) to add impact. This will be a goal for you to keep working towards.
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