hiwi the kiwi

on wensday kiwi the kiwi came to our school he gave as some fishing tips.
and i won a fishing book and a poster of kiwi the kiwi. here is my writing

spelling test

this week we did our spelling test for the week.
and i got all of my words right .
we did this so we can be really good at spelling and to see if we need to work on them and here is my one

Chiddlewaddle diddlewaddle DOO

this is a pome that we read and got to make our own one so here is my WALT use  rhyme  patterns  effectively 
Chiddlewaddle Diddlewaddle Doo 

sit sit on a chunky chair 
bling bling with a shining ring 
run run with a hot cross bun 
Chiddlewaddle Daddelwaddle Doo 


cry cry with a grown mans pie 
run run with my dad smelly gun 
fight fight with a bright white light
 Chiddlewaddle Diddelwaddle Doo 

jump jump with a big fat lump   
cry cry with mums new guy 
 fight fight with mummies new night light 
Chiddlewaddle Diddlewaddle Doo

run run with mummies  
new guy spine spine on a power line 
bike bike with mummies new bike
 Chiddlewaddle Diddlewaddel
 Chiddlewaddle Diddlewaddel 
Chiddlewaddle Diddlewaddel DOO 

 

treaty

The treaty of Waitangi was made by the Maoir and the English people 

Cinquains are poems that are short and easy to write. They follow the format below.

Before I got this  finsh peace I had to make 3 other to make this peace 

I had to take some word from my first one then toke some from 2 one .then had my finsh peace 

Treaty 

Peace singing 

No war  shareing Cultures

Angry upset unfair   Covenant 

 Agreement 

Speech

W.A.L.T write and in form 

Task write and present an interesing graduation speech about our learning journey using an analogy to compare learing to something meaningful to me 

Character writing

W.A.L.T describe 

Criteria:

Use vocabulary (words) that help to clearly describe

Verbs to give action - brings our character to life

Adverbs describe my verbs

I have used adjectives to help describe my character

My writing is organised into paragraphs (ideas in each paragraph is connected)

I have used the thesaurus to extend my own vocabulary

The reader can understand and FEEL how special this character is to us 

I have SHOWN the reader what my character is like as a person

I have made sure my sentences make sense

The rss hub launch

W.A.L.T is to entertain people

In room14 we have been writing about the rss hub launch   

Writing bad pet & good pets

Goal is to entertain the people

Criteria using verbs&adding detail &capture the attention 

In room 14 we have been writing about funny pet or bad pet.I Have a story for you. I hope like it 

I think that I did the best that I could .buddy I think that you are experienced at shooting and good luck

Memory writing

In room14 we have been doing memory writing it was about a memory and the thing  that we lost or gave it away 

Character Sketch - 1st Craft